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Hi, I have to write a report (very long) on the art of Japanese culture +. I want to know what you think my work so far. How do you fix it while still in my writing style. Also, please correct? THanks:! Conclusion In conclusion, Japan is a place where centuries old traditions meet Western flare. Rich cultural lure, with the noble work of art both Japan and the wide variety of entertainment. To get to Japan, the journey may be long, but what which comes on arrival charming. high-quality clothes and delicious food shows the Japanese style. Traditional drama exciting great crowd, but the rock group are popular, too! What do you think? How well to class 7,? Thanks to all answers. Both provide me with help! I hope I get a A!!

That's good. Here are a few grammar edits, though: "In conclusion, Japan is a place where centuries old traditions meet Western flare. Rich culture of this enchanting, Japan by both the noble art wide variety of entertainment. Travel to Japan may be old, but what comes on arrival charming. high-quality clothes and delicious food shows the Japanese style. Traditional drama yet rock crowd, the music is very popular with large groups, too! interesting "Note i changes were made (i made two): good by the great works of art in Japan and a wide variety of entertainment (Instead of saying "by both") and: a trip to Japan might be old, but what comes on arrival is charming (not: to get to Japan, a trip may be long, but what comes on arrival charming): good. work)